The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow. I felt the helplessness that Paul and his wife must of felt and it leaves me with a new perspective. To have been trained and then to use this training to participate in the game of war... could not be an easy thing to come to the end of. My hope is that anyone facing these familiar circumstances has people who are sensitive and kind in their lives. People who can be the light and instrument that will lead them to the only one who can heal and make them whole again. I will pray differently because of your article. Thank you.
Good read. Realistic, with so many of our military coming back with PTSD.
Good writing. It drew me in; the emotion was there. There is something I can't quite get my finger on though that will make it even better. Try reading it aloud a few times in case you haven't, for flow? Maybe a subtle change...

God bless~