The Official Writing Challenge
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This is beautiful! I hope to see it in the EC list.
Left me with eyes that were wet. I love this article. This is only the second one that I have read so far and both are exquisitely done. Thank you.
Loved this. I imagine this scene repeating over and over throughout history. Good job!
Really great use of dialogue to tell a story. Great demonstration of our pride and ego. I really like how you depicted the gentle truth of Christ.
Yes! Congratulations!

God bless~
Thank you to everyone who posted such nice comments concerning my story! It has been a true encouragement/blessing for me :)
Simple and deep in its internal and external descriptions. Congrats on your EC.
Steven, I had to come back and thank you for being my inspiration for writing an allegory for the "Envy" topic. I am still shaking my head that this did not place higher than 10th. It thrills my heart each time I reread it. One of the most profound and moving entries I have read here.
Thanks for your hard work, and an enjoyable read. Congratulations!