The Official Writing Challenge
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02/05/15
Made me want to go out and find Charlie or someone like him... Not everyone comes to street life because of laziness but I'm sure there are those who do. How sad that must be to think of what might of been or what had been in the past and is no longer. I like that the man took time to shake his hand and give him a sense of worth. We all need that.
02/05/15
Interesting POV and great writing in this piece.

Well done.

God bless~
02/05/15
I loved that the father stopped and really looked at Charlie and talked with him. It was a wonderful teaching moment for the boy. Great job.
02/09/15
Great job! This holds some very moving moments. There was a very human aspect about this piece, that made it easy to buy into. Thanks for sharing. I loved it.
Chapter One.

Well put together. Does the plot thicken or does Charlie drift off into just a memory lane.

Nice start to something more.