The Official Writing Challenge
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11/29/14
Awww. That was a poignant and memorable read.

WEll done.

God bless~
11/29/14
Good for Sam! I like this piece. Nice job. Thank you.
12/02/14
I loved this story too. Sam had my attention and sympathy from the beginning. So glad Mom came around and did something special for him. I had a middle brother, now deceased, who also always felt left out.

Great story! Keep writing. I like your style.
Aw, what a tender story. I am glad Sam finally got noticed by his mom!

I had one thought - some of the paragraphs were long. Perhaps dividing them into shorter ones might make it easier on the reader's eyes? Could be just me though. :)

A very enjoyable read! I loved the ending.
12/04/14
Congrats!



God Bless~