The Official Writing Challenge
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A very candid and overt account written from the heart, I enjoyed the powerful close.

God bless~
Wow, that felt very real. I was surprised to learn that it was fiction!
It is marked as fiction but it seems that it could be a real life story.

There is good content in this story. It needs some proof reading for spaces between some of the words but it was still easy to follow and read.

I like the story and the struggle and determination shown in it.