The Official Writing Challenge
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11/20/14
I so enjoyed this piece!

It was filled with adventure from start to finish. It took off and landed beautifully!

Well done!

God bless~
Incredible writing! You deftly wove the back story in with the action, and carried the suspense through to the end beautifully.
I expect to see you in Advanced soon!
Oh boy...that was good. I liked the fast-moving pace and the lovely imagery. Great suspense too!
Yes, I don't know how they do those things in the air.

Quite a well written adventure story.
11/29/14
Congrats!
God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level and 14 overall! Happy Dance!