The Official Writing Challenge
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11/20/14
Interesting piece, well written and multi layered.

God bless~
11/21/14
Very suspenseful and enjoyable read! Makes me wonder what happens next. :)
This could be the final chapter of a short story. Fill in the details of how they started out on this adventure and what led them to this point (this chapter)

Then you could continue with book two of the adventure from where this story leaves off.

Good plot, good conversation, fast action. Good writing.