The Official Writing Challenge
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You were on topic, told a story that kept me riveted and held my attention throughout. Well done!

God bless~
This was a fantastic take on the topic, I was left hoping you'll write the sequel of what Andy does with his second chance in life. Thank you for sharing.
Great imagery in this story! One suggestion is to read the story slowly out loud - then you should be able to hear any sentences that "don't sound right" or have grammar errors in them - and you can correct them. Keep writing!