The Official Writing Challenge
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10/23/14
You were on topic, told a story that kept me riveted and held my attention throughout. Well done!

God bless~
This was a fantastic take on the topic, I was left hoping you'll write the sequel of what Andy does with his second chance in life. Thank you for sharing.
10/26/14
Great imagery in this story! One suggestion is to read the story slowly out loud - then you should be able to hear any sentences that "don't sound right" or have grammar errors in them - and you can correct them. Keep writing!