The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/14
That was a cute story...well written. I could see the scenery so well from your description.

On a serious note, thank God nothing was broken...just his pride.

God bless~
10/10/14
Sounds like your family enjoys having fun together in the snow. I was glad everything turned out OK because it could have been tragic.

Your descriptions made it sound like a great fun day. I for one, do not like snow at all and wish it were warm all year round.

Good writing! Blessings, LaVonne
10/13/14
Great story! Well written. Glad everyone was safe.
Congratulations on ranking 8th in your level! Happy Dance!