The Official Writing Challenge
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That was a cute story...well written. I could see the scenery so well from your description.

On a serious note, thank God nothing was broken...just his pride.

God bless~
Sounds like your family enjoys having fun together in the snow. I was glad everything turned out OK because it could have been tragic.

Your descriptions made it sound like a great fun day. I for one, do not like snow at all and wish it were warm all year round.

Good writing! Blessings, LaVonne
Great story! Well written. Glad everyone was safe.
Congratulations on ranking 8th in your level! Happy Dance!