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Nicely done and certainly on topic. Well written account of the familiar verse in the Bible.

GOd bless~
Excellent choice for this topic! Love the story - and you do a nice job with it.

Would love to see a bit more from the main character - you seemed to do a good amount of telling us what was going on, rather than showing through actions.

I love biblical fiction, and this one was lovely. Thanks for sharing!

Very good writing with this piece on grace and love. A mother who truly loves her children will do anything to save them. So will Jesus!

Watch your spacing between paragraph when you transfer over. I always do a preview to see if I got it right. Also, the last line is missing a word - as (she?) raced home.

Blessings, LaVonne
Good retelling . . .

Please consider throwing a brick for comments, critique, helpful hints and warm fuzzies!

1 Peter 3:15 - But sanctify the Lord God in your hearts: and [be] ready always to [give] an answer to every man that asketh you a reason of the hope that is in you with meekness and fear:

Hugs and prayers, Judi

God bless~