The Official Writing Challenge
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Awwww....this was a sweet and easy read. I could see this as a children's booklet, with pictures matching your well written descriptive scenarios.

I thought this a splendid piece and completley on topic...really well done and so enjoyable.

God bless~
Very nicely done! It is good to have you back and in this level!

I tend to believe however that this is a true story about a beloved pet and companion.

Keep up the good work and cudos for a great story.

God Bless always...
I happen to be reading this one when my 5-year-old daughter leaned against me and asked, "Whatcha reading?"

I read her your story and she smiled and said, "Did you write that? It is good."
Now this is precious. I love the way you told Belle's story. So touching from her point of view.

Very well written and worthy of level 2 competition. Hope this makes the judges sit up and take notice of this fine writing.

The main character talks but I don't know how you would use quotation marks. In this case maybe they are not needed and shouldn't be used.

Very good telling your story.

I liked it.


Congratulations on a job so well done. I'm thrilled for you my friend. I'm so happy for you, do you hear my applause from way over here???

Keep it up!

God bless~
Robert, I am soooo happy for you. You finally got the recognition you deserve. I think this should have been ranked even high, it was such a good write.

Very proud for you!

Congratulations Robert!!

This is a great start to being in the intermediates. Only way now is UP.

So very happy for you! :)

Many Blessings...