The Official Writing Challenge
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08/28/14
Wow! This was an excellent piece of writing along with a gripping and moving story. The inner anguish and torment of the MC was palpable. Rape is a horrific and deplorable reprehensible act, and your MC reflected the aftermath and the repercussions of a "child by force" in what many women face.

The hands of God and His grace...along with faith at the end gave a glimpse of hope, light and love.

Truly excellent, sobering and jarring!

God bless~
Very well written! You did a great job expressing the emotions of your MC.
08/30/14
A very intense story about one of life's deepest horrors.

Well written and very touching.

Good job.
Stories like this may bring back unforgiven memories of others but your conclusion may also help some to forgive others, forgive themselves and have a hope of something different in the future.

Keep writing. Short stories may be your thing.
09/04/14
Shanta,

Fabulous entry, excellent work.

Congratulations on this fine and prolific piece of writing.

God Bless~
09/04/14
Well deserved placement...congrats.
09/04/14
Excellent descriptive writing that truly nailed the topic! The first sentence "hooked" me in, and your conclusion brought this beautiful story to a fitting and heart touching conclusion.

Congratulations. Well done!