The Official Writing Challenge
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08/21/14
Awww. I loved this piece. It had me hoping for the outcome that you delivered at the end. Well done.

God bless~
Very well written. Was anticipating a twist, but it was just good 'ol happiness. Very nice.
08/22/14
Great story with enough tension to keep me reading and a happy ending which I am a sucker for.

Thanks.
08/28/14
Congratulations!

God bless~