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Very clever use of music as a theme, with recurring musical allusions to maintain interest for your readers. Great work which should rate well, for you wrap it up well with a positive close.
I really loved this!
Well done.

God bless~
I really like the way he proposed to her - let's make music together. It takes work to play and sing in harmony, just as it takes work to make a good marriage. You said it well in this little piece.

Nice story! Blessings, LaVonne
Bravo. Encore. Bravo.
The incidents of this story are all too real and happens many times.

This is a well written image that could belong to anyone.

Let your ideas and feeling/emotions flow in your words.

God bless~
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