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08/15/14
Positive, simple and down to earth - strongly flavoured with integrity. Well done.
08/16/14
Couples should read this, frame it, and hang it over the mantel piece. This is a sure fire way to make a marriage work.

Thanks for sharing. This is very good.
08/16/14
I was thinking the same as Lynn...this should be framed and hanging on the wall. I'll bet one of the five will do that for you this Christmas. :)

Great job with presenting us such an uplifting picture of a happy marriage.
Wow. So many couples allow the loss of a child to wreck their marriage and you made it through five.

This poem could be a family treasure for your children and grandchildren.
08/17/14
Sound advice and your faith shines through your words.
08/17/14
Wonderful poetic tribute to marriage and family.
You present a good witness of God's grace to a marriage.
08/18/14
This should be a tapestry in every married household!
Beautifully expressed...and congratulations on your successful and loving marriage.

Loved this tribute to your marriage.

God bless~
08/19/14
Such a powerful testimony of love and devotion.

My heart weeps for those couples that will never experience such joy.

My wife and I have been married 46 years and have seven children.

Our prayer every day is that our children will experience the happiness my wife and I have had and still have because of our close relationship with God and our Lord.

Nothing So Great As A Good Mate!
I liked it and the story it told.

It was easy to read because of the rhythm in each line. The rhyming words were also well chosen.

To me it seemed this may have been an easy poem for you to write.

Good writing.