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08/15/14
Good credible dialogue and atmosphere, with a strong message.
08/18/14
Awww...tender, poignant and powerfully moving.

God bless~
08/19/14
My wife and I go to the nursing home three times a week and see so many instances of that.

It is heartbreaking on some occasions and heartwarming on others.

They know they are loved. They might not understand, but they know.

You brought out some wonderful points on the blessings of a long and loving marriage.

Great job.
I want to be that man in the story.

I think God still allows Satan to put things in our lives that will be a test - a test of devotion/faithfulness not only to our mate but also to God.

Pain was felt in the woman's words but was the pain from her not accepting the test of singleness at the moment? (James 1:2-18) (I am just assuming singleness.)

You did a good job expressing her pain as well as a good job expressing joy and contentment in the man's situation.
08/21/14
Congrats!

God bless~