The Official Writing Challenge
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Well written entry. I enjoyed your story and I liked the way you wrapped it up. Good job.

God bless~
Interesting story!
It was a little too provocative for my taste.

I guess I am a prude!

Just my thoughts.

Hope this doesn't offend you.
Thank you all for your comments, and no I'm not offended at all by what's clearly meant as constructive criticism.

I hope you've received the private message I sent you about this matter by way of a reply.