The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! Powerfully moving, and absorbing in all facets.

Well done...excellent writing here!

God bless~
I too am a preacher's kid. Well, an older kid now. This story reminds me of me, several times in my life. We must never give up, but always give it up to Him. Your story brought back some memories. Nice job.
Wow. powerful statement.
Excellent writing.
I enjoyed this very much, from the internal turmoil to the final outcome.
Super Job!

You had me all the way. The beginning could use a little drawing in.

Your plot was riveting and suspenseful.

I will be looking at your future writings.

Well done.

God bless
I sit biting my lower lip as I read this. I too have tried the direction of suicide many times, but He always pulls me from the depths of despair. This hits strongly as I receive news about the incomparable Robin Williams . . .
Wow, that is the only word. This just ripped at my gut and could have been me in that car when I have tried to figure out which way to go. This is so realistic (too so and I pray it's creativity and not experience). I want to reach through the screen and hold the terrified girl and tell her it'll be okay. Outstanding writing and I didn't see any red ink to use.
Keep 'Winging His Words!'
WOW! Powerful, moving, gripping, you had the lot! You are a talented writer and well deserving of the top spot this week. A big congratulations to you.
Congratulations on a well-deserved ranking!
Congratulations! I knew this was an outstanding piece. I'm doing my best happy dance!
Congratulations for hitting the top of EC for this heartbreakingly beautiful story.
"Something tells me I can't choose just one. Hope and despair, peace and suffering...they come and go hand in hand. The two roads are one."

Oh, the profound wisdom in those words! Congratulations on writing a truly riveting story...and winning a well deserved EC.
Hugs! Congratulations!

God bless~
You have a storytelling gift.
Just the right amount of humor mixed with an intense and realistic plot, with a touch of mystery and romance.
Well done and congratulations on your well deserved EC 1st place.

God bless~
Congrats on your winning entry. It is absolutely outstanding.

Well deserved.
Real and heart stirring. Wonderfully written. Congratulations on fist place!
Congratulations. Excellent. A very worthy win.