The Official Writing Challenge
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08/01/14
Excellent story and so well written. It's sad that as much as society has advanced it seems to be stagnant in other areas, and this story was indicative of such.

Good job.

God bless~
Good story with a nice wrap up message at the end.
Your story deals with a sensitive topic kindly but directly and challenges attitudes and behavior that should be challenged. Great message, well done.
08/04/14
Coals of fire!

It is so hard to speak kindness to those that breath hatred and bias. Your writing pointed out so well the challenges of raising children that will be the focus of ignorant, bigoted people.

Good job.

I was small and picked on as child. I am so glad that God looks not on the outward appearance of a man, but on his heart.
A well written story of a common setting, at least in larger cities.

Emotions leaked out.

Help!, stir the pot. It's boiling!

Learning to face other people's views and accept them without losing one's own self esteem is the difficult task.

It seems you put a lot of energy and thought into this writing.

What a delightful take on the topic. This is fresh and creative and I really enjoyed it. Be careful about your tenses. You started with the past, then slipped into present and back again. I loved the main message in this story. The words of the little one are golden and I wish that it could be read by everyone. Great writing.
08/08/14
Congrats!
God BLess~
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