The Official Writing Challenge
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08/01/14
So many good stories in here this week. This entry was creative and told a good story in the process.

I enjoyed it. Well done.

God bless~
I liked this story, especially the idea of the salt substitutes being almost the same but not quite. Good picture of how Satan sometimes acts as an angel of light.
Neat story, well written!
08/03/14
Wow, that was a very unexpected take on the topic! I liked it.

The danger of "counterfeit salt" in a spiritual sense is quite real. You showed that very well.
08/04/14
I liked this story. We need to learn the difference between God's good gift(s) and Satan's counterfeits.
I also liked the reference to fresh ground pepper versus pepper in a shaker. I never thought of that before.

"Now, I wouldn't think that was a good idea." Should you substitute don't for wouldn't? To me it would make more sense. I stumbled a little on that sentence to tell you the truth.
08/04/14
A wonderful lesson every child should hear.

Great job on the topic.

Well written.

I liked this very much. God bless
Informative, entertaining and delightfully spicy!
08/04/14
This was an awesome, well-written message. I'm wondering how many really like pepper as much as this girl though? Maybe more than I think? Anyway, well done.
Thanks for an interesting teaching lesson using salt and pepper.

God's word is always true.

Half of God's word is never true.

Keep your eyes in his word as you write.
I really appreciated your creative take on this subject--educational and motivational without being too preachy. Keep writing!
This is an outstanding story. It has the perfect balance and is a wonderful message. You opened my eyes as it is hard at times to distinguish what is good and what is bad.
08/06/14
You wrote unless a person is willing to be broken every day, they are of not much use-
wow yet another profound insight in this weeks entries.

Lots of fabulous words flowed this week!
08/08/14
Congrats!
God BLess~
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Congratulations on ranking 2nd in your level and 13 overall! The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.