The Official Writing Challenge
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11/28/05
I've never given much thought to this little snippet of Noah's life - and you've captured it well. There are a few typos to be cleaned up, but otherwise, this is a wonderful story!
11/30/05
I agree. A wonderful take on Noah's husbandry that I have missed, but "irrigation" is the word you wanted.
I enjoyed the tender care Noah put into his garden. What joy to taste of those first fruits! Watch your tense shifts and fragments. :-)
12/01/05
Wonderful story. It takes time and patience to produce the best longest lasting fruit--in the natural and the spiritual realms. Are we patient enough to let God do His work with the fruit we are producing? Good job:)
12/03/05
Hey Mr. Ed - this was really good! Like you noticed yourself - just a few cleanups, but then you've got a great perspective on a time we hardly think about! I enjoyed this!