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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Day and Night (07/10/14)
At the beginning of creation as mentioned in the Bible God created light.The Sun to mark the day and the moon to mark the night,beautiful sunrise and sunset.

The creation story talks about six days of work.God's idea of time is different from ours.

We have created many bulbs and light in this model.We have made technology in our control,but God controls the Universe .

The sun is the bright morning star while the moon is the earth's satellite.The earth rotates around the sun in an elliptical orbit.

We have discovered many things about the sun and the moon.The Lord Jesus Christ controls the days and nights of all of us.He has a set purpose for everything and He will use everyone towards it.

So let us discover,create and populate the earth.Let's do productive work and be of essential service to others.

Let there be an awakening of knowledge,wisdom,understanding and beauty and may everyone enjoy love and security;prosperity,growth and success.

To God be the glory always and may our sins be forgiven and may we receive healing in our bodies,hearts,mind,souls and spirit.
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Larry Whittington
07/21/14
You have several thoughts and ideas all through into the DAY AND NIGHT theme. Many will understand how they can connect while others will not grasp this.

For the some who do not grasp the connection an additional sentence or two may be needed to explain how they are connected.

I like the "thought filled" work. Others may want just a little more.
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 
07/21/14
This is simple and short, but has such a profound message. I noticed some tiny spacing issues. That happens sometimes, so always hit preview before submit. A good way to prevent hitting submit accidentally is don't fill in level or title until you're sure it looks just like you want. I also noticed some missing commas after introductory phrases. In Jan's Writing Basics on the message boards, she just did a lesson about that recently. It's a great resource for all writers. Your piece is spot on topic while still delivering a powerful message. When I read the last word, I felt a sense of peace drape me.
C D Swanson 
07/21/14
Powerful, pertinent message that jumps out to the reader. This was well done, and well said. Thank you.

God Bless~
Phillip Cimei
07/22/14
Many wonderful thoughts put on paper. I say amen to them. I would of liked to have seen you expand on each thought and tie it to the topic.

It was a little disjointed for my taste, but that is my taste. Others may feel differently.

I hope to see more of your work. Thanks for your heart felt work.