The Official Writing Challenge
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I figured this was Job right off, but still enjoyed the entries and his perservance. There have been a few Job stories, but your presentation in the forum of a diary was a unique take on the story. Some of the sentences needed some smoothing out. They read a bit stilted. Using contractions would help to make it more natural. Definitely take time to make sure you really proof it. Little things can make the reader stumble. Job is the quintessential bounce backer and we can all certainly learn from this message. Nice job.
06/16/14
Great job with the topic. Who could be more "taylor made" for the topic than old Job himself?

Clever approach and well done!

God bless~
You had aninteresting way of showing the time sequence - all dated the same.

I would have like a little about Job's three "friends" and God's talk with them.