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05/03/14
Beautiful job and beautiful message. It was obviously non-fiction, so you were able to show your internal conflict at the irony in this well written entry.

I had a similar entry this week about "my retreat" only it was my friends who were about to drop from having to "check in there technology at the front desk" nothing was allowed.

I was so thrilled, I didn't want to leave the place! LOL.

Anyhow, great job. I hope you had a spectacular journey with God then and always.

God bless~
05/03/14
Beautiful job and beautiful message. It was obviously non-fiction, so you were able to show your internal conflict at the irony in this well written entry.

I had a similar entry this week about "my retreat" only it was my friends who were about to drop from having to "check in their technology beloved items at the front desk" nothing was allowed.

I was so beyond thrilled, I didn't want to leave the place! What a way to commune with the Lord God Almighty.

Anyhow, great job. I hope you had a spectacular journey with God at your retreat then, and always.

God bless~
This was easy to read. It flowed smoothly.

I liked the initial "human-ness" about finding out about the change in rooms.

Acceptance came quickly upon viewing the accommodations.

Heart given over to the day ahead.

Good read.
05/07/14
Lovely story and well written, interesting personal experience for you at the right timing!