The Official Writing Challenge
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04/24/14
Powerfully delivered!
Well done.

God bless~
Wonderful job of showing the topic. I enjoyed this very much.
This is adorable. You have a delightful sense of humor and a wonderfully delicious sense of creativity. I noticed some points the tense switched in mid verse but understand the rhyme and meter trumped the tense. You nailed the topic and really painted a brilliant picture. I'm sure we all can relate to your characters in ways we wish we couldn't. Great job.
04/24/14
This is brilliant! I enjoyed it from start to finish!
04/25/14
I love this poem! It is clever and true and the rhymes flow smoothly. When I try writing rhyming poems, stanzas usually feel contrived. Every line in this poem fit nicely. Great job on the topic too!
04/28/14
This was fun to read and the message delivered by Preacher Juan comes across loud and clear. Good job.
05/01/14
Congrats Maura!

Excellent job.

God bless~