The Official Writing Challenge
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Powerfully delivered!
Well done.

God bless~
Wonderful job of showing the topic. I enjoyed this very much.
This is adorable. You have a delightful sense of humor and a wonderfully delicious sense of creativity. I noticed some points the tense switched in mid verse but understand the rhyme and meter trumped the tense. You nailed the topic and really painted a brilliant picture. I'm sure we all can relate to your characters in ways we wish we couldn't. Great job.
This is brilliant! I enjoyed it from start to finish!
I love this poem! It is clever and true and the rhymes flow smoothly. When I try writing rhyming poems, stanzas usually feel contrived. Every line in this poem fit nicely. Great job on the topic too!
This was fun to read and the message delivered by Preacher Juan comes across loud and clear. Good job.
Congrats Maura!

Excellent job.

God bless~