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04/10/14
I really enjoyed this very creative poem. Martha and Mary both tug at me too. I have thought that many times, but don't think I could ever write about it as beautifully as you've done here.
04/11/14
What a beautiful and creative poem! I loved the message. Inspiring and moving.

So many will relate to the duo capacities of both sisters, and this was a fresh way of approaching this scripture applying it to our lives. Excellent!

God bless~

04/11/14
Sorry...that was supposed to read "dual capacities"

Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem.

God bless~
04/13/14
You captured the inner struggles of the Mary and Martha sisters in us.

Nice job
04/14/14
I enjoyed the poetic reminder of Martha and Mary.
04/14/14
Beautiful poem with a timeless message for the stressed or preoccupied soul. Keep them coming!
I like the questioning of who will win in my life - Mary or Martha.

That is a question we all have to wrestle with.

Good work on the abab pattern of rhyming words. This takes some time and work. Well done.

Poems may be your thing. Keep at it.
04/17/14
Congrats!

God bless~
Exquisitely presented. Expressive, emotive - real.

Congratulations on your "Highly Recommended"!