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A poignant view of many of the problems facing the United States today.

Just a note.. in the last stanza "its" doesn't need an apostrophe.

Great stuff. A little heavy, but executed well.
I liked this a lot. Thanks for sharing.
Wow - This was sheer brilliance! I absolutely applaud this commentary of current issues facing our world...along with the closing of "what's to come" and how Christians ultimately will win.


Loved it!

God bless~
I agree, this was awesome and so true! Most people don't speak on this stuff and you hit the nail on the head! Loved it, great genius!
Well stated commentary on the sinking of our nation.
Great article poetically written. All that you have outlined can be seen very clearly. But God is on His throne. Well done.