The Official Writing Challenge
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Aww. Good for those two. I like happy endings. Well done.

Just a note... I thought this sentence was a little awkward, "Jennys body physical transformed."
Obviously a lot of history and changes within the relationship...the reader can/must fill in what may have transpired along the way.

I liked the ending, filled with hope and forgiveness.

God bless~
Poignant and believable. I got a bit confused as to who was saying what in the telephone dialogue. Perhaps you could once in the exchange identify the speaker somehow to help the reader keep track.