The Official Writing Challenge
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Beatuiful job with this, lovely, simply lovely. Great message and well written

God bless~
I'm still working on coming up with proper red ink comments so I don't have much to offer. My main suggestion is to look into working on your punctuation. You have a great ability to tell a compelling story and obvious raw talent. I think working on the little (big) things like grammar and punctuation will make your good stories absolutely great.

Wonderful story.
I can really relate to Cindy! How overwhelming God's love is when we know that we are steeped in sin.

I was really grabbed by your fifth paragraph where Cindy is being yelled at by the people passing by. "What would that be like?" I found myself wondering.
A touching story of a woman who can't believe someone, anyone, could possibly love them the way they are. I hold tears in my eyes when I think of Cindy and the addiction that has taken over her soul.

Thanks for sharing.
You wrote a compelling tale of redemption.
So many unfortunate people feel as if they have to clean up for the bridegroom and ultimately miss the wedding feast.