The Official Writing Challenge
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02/02/14
Interesting point of view - coming from the dog's perspective. I would give him another name however - Chewy sounds like a name for a trouble making dog - just my opinion. This evangelistic story has a dynamic ending - and acts as a call to repentance. Keep writing.
02/04/14
Great point of view!
You deviated from that POV by the end of the story and weakened it.
I like your style. Keep it up.
02/04/14
Great story and a wonderful ending. I really enjoyed this, I'm a sucker for "animal" characters, and powerful endings. This had both.

Nicely done.

God bless~
02/05/14
Great message!

There were a few problems with mechanics. And, like the previous reviewer said, when you switched the POV, it took away from the flow of the story a little.

Keep writing!