The Official Writing Challenge
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01/18/14
Such a sweet story and is so fitting for the topic. I totally love this description, it's my favourite line indeed: " liquid brown pools in a chocolate face."
Do we keep asking God for blessings as proof he loves us.


Isn't his gift of Jesus's death on the cross enough for us.

Your story is a good illustration of how we are with God but he never feels pushed to the limit by our actions.

I like your story.

Your use of "life stories" work well for you.
01/21/14
"When we learn what it really means to love others and we practice it, we can finally feel loved in return."—A Christian Child Psychologist and friend.

Your piece is very touching and filled with emotion. The hallmarks of a good writer. This one should do well in the challenge.

Keep submitting!
01/23/14
Congrats my dear!
01/24/14
This story is so much like some of the children in my pre-school class, especially those with foster parents. They constantly need a hug.

Congratulation on your win! Blessings, LaVonne