The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 459 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
01/19/14
This is such an heart-breaking story. The emotions presented are very strong and the pain is almost raw; very nice description.
Emotions spilling from the hearts of those who do not speak.

Emotions expressed by the questions with no visible answers and yet, is God working all things out for the good of those who Love the Lord and are called according to his purpose?

Will John's prayer be answered?

Tune in next week for another exciting episode: Does God answer prayers?
You have created a monster of me - I want MORE! More! More! What a stunning article . . .
01/21/14
Very compelling. A beautiful description of the first part of the grieving process. Yes, I cried!
01/21/14
There is a plethora of powerful emotion in this piece. A pertinent and timeless subject. My only suggestion would be to start with something other than "tick tock". Your opening made me think it was going to be a yawning experience, but it was not. Try opening the piece with a real eye, gut, or heart gripper.

This is a powerful piece and I hope it does well in the challenge. Keep it up!
Thank you everyone for your kind words. Your encouragement and constructive feedback has been extremely helpful. Blessings!