The Official Writing Challenge
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I agree with you; eternal life with Jesus is sure worth the wait. Just an observation, A couple commas is missing & that tend to throw off the sentences a little...such as in the 1st sentence, I think that period was meant to be a comma. Overall, a very nice piece with a strong message.
Clever way to approach the topic. Enjoyed the story AND the application at the end (though I think the beginning part could be expanded a bit - just my thoughts).

Thanks for sharing!
I would like to live such a life that others could see Jesus in me since they are not seeing Jesus in his creation, then they might see him as Lord and Christ, repent of their sin and be baptized for the forgiveness of their sin. the angels of heaven would be rejoicing.

Yes, we ask ourselves what can I write to help them see Jesus.
I like the very current nature of your subject. Lots of things going on between the Christian's and world's view of things right now.

Good entry, i hope it does well. Keep up the good work.