The Official Writing Challenge
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11/29/13
You've managed to tell a good story with a powerful message in a condensed version. That's talent!

Great job, and great message.

God bless~
You did a great job! Your story has a powerful message.
This is a nice devotion. Too many people these days are posers. It's so important to have a close relationship with God.
12/03/13
This is a profoundly important message here. You definitely have an aptitude for writing. However, it sounded like your ending was a bit rushed.
A tip: always read over your entry several times before hitting the submit button. You'll be surprised at the things you notice that you might want to change. Keep writing!
12/05/13
Congrats! God bless~
Congratulations! Happy Dance!!