The Official Writing Challenge
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You've managed to tell a good story with a powerful message in a condensed version. That's talent!

Great job, and great message.

God bless~
You did a great job! Your story has a powerful message.
This is a nice devotion. Too many people these days are posers. It's so important to have a close relationship with God.
This is a profoundly important message here. You definitely have an aptitude for writing. However, it sounded like your ending was a bit rushed.
A tip: always read over your entry several times before hitting the submit button. You'll be surprised at the things you notice that you might want to change. Keep writing!
Congrats! God bless~
Congratulations! Happy Dance!!