The Official Writing Challenge
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11/14/13
I felt the MC's pain and inner struggles within this sobering piece.

Excellent writing.

God bless~
11/19/13
A beautifully written piece of work. Very creative and you ask a very important question. Great job.
I know there is much more meaning to your poetry than I my shallow mind is gleaning, because I've read it three times and keep coming back for more, and seeing something deeper. Love it.