The Official Writing Challenge
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Powerful and so very true . . .
Lovely, beautiful, truthful, and compelling.

God bless~
A very beautiful piece of writing...God bless!
I can really connect with your poetic message - how can I see God when I don't look outside of my own little world? If you'd like to improve, you might work on the the meter of your poetry, but your heart shines through. Good job!