The Official Writing Challenge
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Too short but dynamic! I wish you had expanded further, but it is a good warning nonetheless . . .
You pulled me in immediately, and held my attention...well done and well written with an important message to boot.

God bless~
I agree that this could be expanded, but the point is clear - we are all sinners, so what right do we have to judge others? Nicely done; great message.