The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow - fantastic story, it gave me chills! I loved everything about this story. So well written while providing an excellent inspirational message.

God bless~
You may have had to have gone through a tornado to write this.

(I did in about 1949.)

I liked the time change. It brought the story to a nice conclusion.

The emotions stood out well.

We sometimes don't think about a God that can do unusual things but when we think about the fact that God can forgive our sins just by being baptized, that is truly amazing.

Keep putting yourself into your work.
Wonderfully written, thoroughly engrossing.
Congratulations! I was so happy to see your story get recognition! Nicely done!

God bless~