The Official Writing Challenge
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11/07/13
You've crafted an interesting stories with opposing views of the two MC's, and done it well. The dialogue was smooth and sounded natural and flowing.

Good job, I enjoyed it.

God bless~
Good conversations.

I am not good at this and need to practice more.

Part of what is hard for people to believe is that baptism has any part in the salvation or saving from sin but this is what Peter said that baptism was for. He said, "be baptized for the remission of your sins". Then he said they would receive the gift of the Holy Spirit and this is where grace begins because a person is now a child of God and God's grace is extended to him.

Again you have a good flow in your conversation.

OH, and did I say I need to work on that for myself.