The Official Writing Challenge
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A very good message while being on topic. This was a clever analogy for the topic at hand, nicely done.

God Bless~
I see two or three areas of ideas that you could put in their own paragraphs.

Short paragraphs can be powerful just like short sentences can be powerful.

The sentence, "Jesus wept." is an example of a short, powerful sentence.

The apostle Paul didn't always use short sentences so his sentences has to be really studied for understanding.

That pig story in Matthew makes us wonder about demons in today's world.

Keep writing as you are lead by the Lord.