The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this interesting take on the Prodigal Son. I liked how you switched from the fish to the boy. Perhaps if you had put a line of stars****between the sections that would help the transition stand out more. I'm sure there will be a lot of stories about fish and the Prodigal Son this week, but you managed to tell the story with a fresh twist. That made your story stand out and made it memorable. Nice job.
11/04/13
Excellent job with the familiar Biblical story. I loved how you managed to weave it into your "own" and brought it to life.

Nicely done.

God bless~
11/06/13
Good read. Liked the way you weaved the two stories to make a solid point.
11/07/13
Congratulations! God Bless~