The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice re-telling of this familiar story and how you wove it around the topic. Good job.
Excellent job! I loved this entire piece from beginning to end. On topic and powerful.

God bless~
This is brilliant. You brought the story to life and made me think how those men must have felt. It also shows how much Jesus really loves us. You nailed the topic in a fresh and interesting way. This is one of my favorites.
Congratulations! God Bless~
Congratulations on placing 1st in your level and 16 overall!
I enjoyed your presentation through Peter's eyes. You kept it true while making it your own. Well done and congratulations on your 1st place level ribbon!