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10/10/13
Amen. Beautiful and meaningful entry with an important message throughout.

God bless~
10/14/13
I was also raised Jewish, so I can SO relate to this piece! Thank you for sharing it! Amazing when one of God's chosen becomes chosen again! :D
This is a powerful testimony. It brought all kinds of emotions up in me and made me stop and think. It makes sense why they would react the way they did when you explained it like that.

You had some tiny errors like Christian's instead of Christians that a good proofreader might help you catch. You also may want to double space between paragraphs to give the reader that all important white space.

You did a great job of covering the topic. I liked how your ending brought everything full circle. I'm eager to read more of your work.

Congratulations on placing 1st in your level and 21 overall! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards)
10/21/13
Congratulations! God bless~
10/24/13
Yay-wonderful testimony and legacy for your family.
Congratulations on your winning entry.