The Official Writing Challenge
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There are some great reminders in this, and I could relate to a lot of it!

One small suggestion would be to put an extra line break between paragraphs. Not a big deal, but it does make it a bit easier on the eyes.

Nice job.
Your story was on topic and touched on so many important messages. There are many points to ponder in this reflective piece. Especially this line: Why is it so easy to go the extra mile for someone we dont know and so difficult to do it for those who matter most in our lives..

Excellent Job.

God bless~
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