The Official Writing Challenge
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09/07/13
Wow, life without peanut butter cups ... can we even call that living?? :)

Nicely done, thanks for sharing this.
09/07/13
This is good. A great way to show all the small "extras" God gives us in life.
09/08/13
Love the couplets that you've listed so simply and so clearly, and the encouragement and challenge for us writers that you've tucked into the last line. Well done.
Simple observations,revealing profound truth. Well done.
09/08/13
Creative and interesting way to present a gratitude list. Well done.
09/10/13
wow - this was so original! I particularly related to this line: Non-swimmers...
escape the thrill of floating on a sea of velvet gazing at the sky.
I never learned how to swim, so I can appreicate that so much. Makes me want to go out and learn how to swim in my local YWCA!

Nicely done. Thanks for this unusual piece.

God bless~
I truly agree with and empathize with everything you have written. Wonderful piece.