The Official Writing Challenge
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08/22/13
Interesting approach to the topic, nicely done.

Loved the last line!

God bless~
08/23/13
Absolutely fascinating sci-fi read. I was just sorry that your 750 words didn't allow us, the readers, to fully understand the world you've created. Your style is intriguing and unique, and I read this more than once to be sure I'd taken hold of everything you had to offer. Super!
08/24/13
I have really enjoyed all of your original takes on the topics and this was no exception. I like your style of writing and think I would love to read a book you wrote.

Being a writer of so-so poems and standard stories, I envy your ability to write as entertainingly as you do.

Excellent.
08/26/13
CD is right, that last line is a good one :)

Well done, thank you sharing it.
08/26/13
CD is right, that last line is a good one :)

Well done, thank you for sharing it.
I want to thank you all for your encouraging comments!

Jan - I would love to someday expand this.

Lynn your writing fits your personality. Be kinder to yourself. I anticipate your lighter than air sunshine - You write beautifully. I would love to write a book. If only we could put all our Challenges in individual books.

CD and Mike - much appreciation - and yes, the last line was a gift from God.