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I am not qualified to judge poetry, but I think you have written a powerful poem. It was a blessing to me to read it. Thank you for sharing a powerful memory in such an interesting way.
Your poem is touching, encouraging and I believe it has an easy flow. Your message comes through clear and of course, you covered the topic well.
This touched my heart. What a lovely tribute to Karen, she sounded like a strong and noble lady. This made me think of my best friend who passed away five years ago, I still miss her, and she too was kind and brave while she fought through her illness.

I'm so sorry for your great and significant loss. Hang on to the memories, as I do...until you meet again to form new ones for all eternity.

God bless~
This is a beautiful tribute to what sounds like a beautiful lady. This is a treasure, a gift God gave to help us keep friends like Karen alive in our hearts until we meet again.