The Official Writing Challenge
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The title captured my attention and the story did not disappoint. I thoroughly enjoyed the story and the message it conveyed. Well done.
Just beautiful - the story, the description, the message. Thank you for sharing!
You certainly can tell a story and tell it well. This pulled me in instantly and had me wanting more. I'd love to know more about the young compassionate nurse and her struggles with writing. I'd like to know what happened to the "ornery" yet helpful and seasoned writer. This is an excellent story, and left one wondering. Yet, the clarifying message it conveyed resonated at the end. Great job!!!

God bless~
I think you did a beautiful job of building these two lovely characters. I felt like I was right there with them. I'm sure you caught the typo in the first line. It did create a great vision of cats popping out of an open wound. Of course I know you meant pus, but I think the next time I see a gross wound instead of cringing, I'll think of you and picture adorable pusses hatching from the wound. You really did a wonderful job (you just need a proofreader who knows the difference between pus and puss!):) HUGS!