The Official Writing Challenge
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I like this. It's different and a fresh take on the topic. I had a little trouble connecting the verses to your message at first, but after I thought about it it did make sense. I also appreciate that you didn't go with the typical complaining verses in Proverbs that many people used. Tiny red ink, okay should be written out or both letters capitalized. Your message is a great one that most people can relate to. I enjoyed this inner dialog with God.
Fresh, interesting and consistently entertaining. I enjoyed the dialogue with God and the entire message overall.

God bless~
This is a clever way to approach the topic. I have had more than a few of these parties, and I think everybody can relate - if they are honest. Well written and a wonderful point made.
Congrats! God bless~
Congratulations for ranking 3rd in your level and 17th overall! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards)
I was just embarking upon my own whine and cry - and then I read this. Can't even get myself to go to my pity party now. Great job! Congratulations