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You've written the story very well. Death comes as a sting. Our Father grieves when a soul rejects His unshakable love and saving. The LORD always gives opportunites of mercy while the person's breath is still with him.

Thank you. God bless you more in your writing.

Wow! Epic...Excellent job!

God bless~
How very said. Great portrayal of how the knocking never stops and how it can end, sadly, when one doesn't heed that final call.

I'm glad that Bull had a friend like Jake who thought enough to come by and try again. how sad that he didn't take the chance.

Great story. Thanks for sharing!
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